MINISAGAS COMPETITION

Congratulations to Eva, winner of the class, with her story 'Just a Normal Day'  and thanks to you all for taking part. I encourage you to keep on writing, as you have good writing skills and a lot of imagination.

Just a Normal Day

Karen was walking using the pedestrian crossing when the fast car hit her violently.

As she opened her eyes, she saw blurred faces and blood everywhere.

Everyone was shouting frantically for help.

A tear came to her eyes, fell off onto the bloody floor and Karen stopped breathing…

Cut!!  We got it!!  Amazing scene!!...

Eva A.  1º NA-A. 

The nightmare

That night was chilly, it was pouring and the noise of the thunders was scary. Suddenly, a lightning struck on the right wing of the plane and it started burning. Immediately panic broke out. The pilot said, ‘we have to make an emergency landing on water’. I shouted and… woke up. Fortunately, it was only a nightmare.

Ana María   1ºNA-A

A different Halloween

The Halloween party ended late. Sarah woke up at noon but her parents weren´t in. She called her boyfriend unsuccessfully. Her mobile was bloodstained! Suddenly a dreadful growl came out from the basement. Is it you, mum? Sarah shrieked scared while something jumped on her. She ran outside, but there was no escape, a crowd of undead were expecting her...

Alberto J  1ºNA-A

           

Unexpected Race

We´d talked about what we´d do if, suddenly, a dog came towards us.

-      ‘I´d run away´.

-      `I´d kick it, that´s the best! ´, I replied.

We went riding to the countryside. We stopped at a drinking fountain and an enormous Rottweiler ran towards us.

Luckily, John only lost a trainer and I became a hurdles race athlete.

Ana Belén M. 1ºNA-A

Not all bullets hurt

His father was cleaning his weapon when suddenly his little son took a bullet. The boy wanted to kill his twin brother with a paper roll and the bullet. However, he swallowed the bullet instead of blowing it. Fortunately, three days later, it came out of his body without having caused any damage.

Eva C. 1º NA-A

What were you thinking about?

One day I went to the supermarket with my youngest son. While shopping I said to myself that he was extremely quiet when suddenly I realized he wasn’t with me. I ran quickly to my car and saw he was sleeping in his chair.

I had forgotten my little son!!

                                                                           Ana Belén  1º NA-A

The Locked Door

I was sleeping when I heard a loud noise. I thought it was just a dream, but suddenly I heard it again. Scared, I got up and walked towards the door at the end of the corridor. When I opened it the light turned off and I felt something right behind me. It was my neighbour’s cat.

Isabel  1º NA-A

What a fright!

When I went to Gibraltar with my extended family, none of us could imagine what was going to happen.

On Saturday morning, the main street is crowded. We were shopping when suddenly my niece got lost.

We started calling her and a policeman appeared. He reprimanded us for not being responsible with the child.

‘Come on Susana, it´s time to get up!!’

            Susana  1º NA-A